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I was thinking about you and lost my way.
I got into a car accident today.
I remember hearing someone say.
Do you have someone, you want to be here today?
The next thing I knew here you are.
What's going on , the last thing I remember I was in my car.
As I look up I could see your face.
Where was I at ,what sort of place?
I can't walk and I can't speak .
Why do I feel so weak?
I feel your hand touching my hand.
What's happening , I dont understand.
I finally hear those words that I've longed to hear from you.
You now tell me your love for me is true.
Why couldn't you tell me when we had the time to share.
All you had told me is how much you care.
Tubes going in and out , it's getting harder for me to breathe.
These words from you, I want to believe.
You are here and holding my hand so tight.
Telling me now that all along that I was right.
I look up into your eyes.
I look at your face as you start to cry.
So much wasted time as you know.
Please Please help me to let go.
I can feel myself getting colder and grow more weak.
You whisper in my ear,"I'm sorry baby , I really do love you" then you kiss my cheek.
A tear rolls down my face.
"I love you, but I'm being called to God's place.
So many wasted years."
"Don't leave me now , I love you,"he said as he wiped my tears.
"I love you , but there's something youve got to know.
I've been in love with you for all these years with a love I will never let go.
Don't worry honey we'll be together again someday."
I say "I love you " with my last breath , and you feel my hand slip away.....
©2004-2009 ~tracy8463
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trying to show someone how important they are before it comes down to this poem.

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:icongc2skadoo:
Cool poem :D I like it.

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:icontracy8463:
thank you so much.

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a.k.a- tracy8463
:icongc2skadoo:
no problem :D

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:icondeadlysilent:
It's such a shame that sometimes it takes a tragedy for somebody to realize how important another is to them. I can't help but wonder if a certain person would come to his senses if something like that happened to me, just when it was too late and we could have had all this time together. Unfortunately I doubt that he would.

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Lynnette Murry AKA DeadlySilent
:icontracy8463:
sometimes it takes something like this for certan people to realize what they had.i want to thank you for your comment.and yes maybe he too will realize what he had when he was with you.

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a.k.a- tracy8463
:icondeadlysilent:
Unfortunately it sometimes does take something like this. I doubt that he will realize what he had. he hasn't even called me or shit and that's kinda sad because he told me in the beginning that i was his special someone, his love of a life time ect

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Lynnette Murry AKA DeadlySilent
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Unfortunately it sometimes does take something like this. I doubt that he will realize what he had. he hasn't even called me or shit and that's kinda sad because he told me in the beginning that i was his special someone, his love of a life time ect

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Lynnette Murry AKA DeadlySilent
:iconwhymebeacause:
wow, this is so moving,

*wipes the tears*

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:iconreyland:
u really have a habit of making making ur readers cry! this is a very good one.. congratulations!

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